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  • when the sun goes down...
  • Title: when the sun goes down...
  • Artist: Crimson Crysis
  • Description: hey pplz. :)
    i know the pages not done yet but i thought u could comment and let me know how u think about it. id like to know whether u like it or not and why .cause ive never shown it to others..(: (im sorry for the quality and the size)
    plz comment =]
    (by the way, thats page 248 from my own manga "cron")
    thx in advance
    :)
  • Date: 11/06/2008
  • Tags: shonen sungoesdown sunset blackhairedgirl fight
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • maskedfaces - 11/08/2008
  • I like the second panel, it is awsome and you draw very good however, the more you pratice on yur art; the better you will become.
  • Kitty Pandas - 11/07/2008
  • da wir ja probleme beim lesen hatten, werde ich es nocheinmal schreiben:
    nice art, sista smile
    i like the dingenslines (you know, at panel 1 + 2) the most biggrin biggrin
    and of course the eyes and the action, but thats what i alwax tell you, dont i ^^
    the qualitiy is REALLY bad, at panel 3 it looks like drawn with pencil^^ but in real it looks defenetly better i hope biggrin
  • Kitty Pandas - 11/07/2008
  • Nice work, sista biggrin
    I like the ... dingenslines i forgot the name biggrin this lines at first and second panel
    yeah the qualitiy isnt the best but your sense of drawing biggrin
  • Mezurin - 11/06/2008
  • Very good. Nice action sequence. You could make it a little bit darker, but I like the white on black contrast. Keep up the good work!
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