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  • MILK QUEST!!!
  • Title: MILK QUEST!!!
  • Artist: Milk Vitasoy
  • Description: One mans quest for chocolatey goodness goes awry...
  • Date: 06/30/2009
  • Tags: milk quest
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Lilikoosh - 07/02/2009
  • Okay this is the last sentence, sorry for the spam. xD Darn word limit.

    Overall, I like the storyboard-esque paneling and direct telling of the comic. Hope to see more from you!
  • Lilikoosh - 07/02/2009
  • Part2lol
    There are no unnecessary panels that show him stubbing his foot or tripping, or extra panels showing the glass leaving One Man's hands. My only gripes are in the spill panel, I'm conflicted on whether the glass is on the floor or still in midair. But that's probably poor analytical skills on my part. Also, the font color in the last panel may have done better as red or black for emphasis.
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