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  • Title: Have i improved yet?...
  • Artist: Vak Don
  • Description: Okay so its been awhile and i gotta say i did improve....i think
    Erm you cant really see the nose
    ._.
    Crap....

    What i used:
    Sharpie pen
    Copic Markers
  • Date: 08/10/2009
  • Tags: have improved vakdon drawing bored
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Roxy Hazard - 06/12/2010
  • ok i like the hair, eyes, and u did a nice job with shading. but u need to work on body structure, the shoulders r pointy & the arms bow in awkwardly... but shes cute ^_^ 4/5
  • silentgrace7 - 06/05/2010
  • In reality, your shoulder width should be approximately double the size of your head. The shoulders needn't be so pointy, and some more curves (giving that your character is a 10 or older.) But aside from that I like it. You have a lot of talent, my friend ^^ 5/5 and favorited.
  • Handske - 04/27/2010
  • You need to work on the proportions and the shape of the shoulders, but other than that, you've got something good going on here! :3
  • MasterpieceTheater - 04/20/2010
  • I like the hair, but you should add some more texture or detail to it and try finding some tutorials on how to add wrinkles to clothing (:
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