- Title: Radiant Angel Chapter 1 Pg 1
- Artist: Asastsuya
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Description:
Well hi there! This is, of course, the first page of many. I really wanted to put a comic here so this is the story line I chose...I guess. I would really like to hear your thoughts.
(Oh and if you can't tell, Ai is being kidnapped in the last panel)
I have another comic I want to try but I want your, the readers, approval first. I want to know if you'd read it before I draw it. lol ^^ well thnks! - Date: 11/21/2009
- Tags: radiant angel chapter
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Comments (7 Comments)
- x_Free Bear Hugz_x - 01/01/2010
- hey very good drawings 5/5 ^^ nice backgrounds biggrin
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- Annabeth1 - 12/31/2009
- wow i luv it its kewl
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- Asastsuya - 12/26/2009
- Right now the story IS NOT SUPPOSE TO MAKE SENSE TO YOU!!! THATS THE POINT!!! lol 3nodding I did it that way on purpose.
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- Miss Improper - 12/19/2009
- it doesnt even make sense
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- Frex-Kate - 12/06/2009
- nice
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- Anemani - 11/25/2009
- this is really awesome... great job on the backgrounds to me those are the hardest part to draw on the comics... along with lots of other things o.o...^^'
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- lince-x - 11/24/2009
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Wow! It all looks perfect!
About story. I think it can be interesting. At least I want to see 3rd and 4th pages yet, I think if a pair of frames more was here it would be better for easier story reading. The first additional frame - two persons walk together or two frames with big faces for understanding then here is TWO person. It's not obviously at first glance. And the second - a siluetta of guys behind this two talk about. Or something for understanding the last frame. (cont.on secnd) - Report As Spam
