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  • Title: Manga test
  • Artist: Hakuouki
  • Description: Right now I'm trying to test how well I draw manga. Since I don't have a tablet, this is the best I can offer, please I hope you like it.
  • Date: 05/10/2011
  • Tags: manga test
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Lawllcious - 09/23/2011
  • I wouldn't say professional, but with out colors its a little cluttered. Go a little easier on the graphical backgrounds to bring the attention back to the characters. Her hair looks really really unhealthy in that top frame because of the separation of so many strands. Doing great though.
  • Nao Nakamura - 08/13/2011
  • I like how its set up. Everything is beautiful yeah you could most definitely improve with a tablet. I am currently writing a manga and I think your doing better than me my editor keeps telling me that the story board needs correcting. I'm on the first chapter and she already has told me to do it over and redraft it at this rate I'll finish within a year. T.T SO honestly your better off than me
  • AutumnHart - 07/17/2011
  • to be honest before this loaded and i saw the title, i groaned. But this is really professional looking I can only imagine if you had a tablet O_O
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