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  • Failed Original Character
  • Title: Failed Original Character
  • Artist: Lunastick
  • Description: You can see all of my artwork at http://lunastick.deviantart.com.
    This is the first thing I've drawn in 4 years. I was trying to draw up an idea for an original character I had, and it didn't turn out how I pictured it at all; however, I am not willing to throw this image away as it has its good qualities.
    Colored with Prismacolor colored pencils.
    Constructive Criticism appreciated!
  • Date: 07/24/2008
  • Tags: original redhead
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Nephilym - 12/12/2008
  • I love her face! ^_^

    Constructive Criticism: Your lines seem a bit unsure of themselves...does that make sense? The come and they go. Make your lines bolder and/or more uniform . If you don't want the look of a bold black line make the lines brown or just a darker shade of the area that's outlined.
  • Zeenrai - 07/26/2008
  • thats awsome, everythings well proportiond and you can tell what it is 5/5 when i attempt to draw people, either thier heads are too big or their limbs are, lol
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