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  • Derrack (a sketch)
  • Title: Derrack (a sketch)
  • Artist: Blond_Sakura
  • Description: This is a rough sketch of one of my characters. (he's sticking his tongue out) i already have a lineart done, and i am beginning to colour it (oh jeez)
    let me know if there's anything i can improve before i finish it. my characters are my babies. please, no rude comments or posting for gold. serious crit wanted, thank you.
    ratings are irrelevant to me since this is just a sketch, but vote if you want to. i don't care.
  • Date: 10/13/2008
  • Tags: derrack sketch
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • red head nell - 10/13/2008
  • I LOOOVE the eyes... and the ear... and the earring... But my one critique would be to maybe make the face a little bit longer.... it seems a little out of proportion to me, compared to the neck and the hair..
  • Princess Aulie - 10/13/2008
  • I think you did well, maybe make his cheek a bit flatter because generally men have flatter faces than women do, and maybe make the top of his eyes thicker than the bottoms. Also this could be personal opinion because it might be because of your style but lengthening to nose a bit might be good too. I really like the character
  • XxKiyo - 10/13/2008
  • This is a graet drawing but work on the eyes just a little and I'm sure it'll look even better.
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