- by Chyanime_X3 |
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- | Submitted on 11/10/2008 |
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- Title: Anime Vampire Bite
- Artist: Chyanime_X3
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Description:
I did this for an art class, the theme was fantasy.
I love the expression in her face but... something didn't come out right on his head and I can't figure out what...
CONSTRUCTIVE critique please? - Date: 11/10/2008
- Tags: anime vampire bite
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Fox725 - 08/03/2012
- that image kinda looks like a scene in the Vampire Knight manga where Zero's drinkin Yuki's blood, in regards to the pose (although Yuki doesnt feel that much agony in her case).
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- unbreakable_comb - 01/22/2010
- I don't think anything is wrong. You did an amazing job. I love how she is in agony, like real pain, not showing that she is secretly in pain.
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- RizaMustang24 - 06/24/2009
- ahhh, I wish I could draw vampire bites. I always mess up on the vampire's head too. Umm, it looks like his arm and his head are positioned incorrectly, and it gives the picture an off kind of feel. The way it's positioned, it looks like his upper arm is shorter than his lower arm by a lot. Also, I guess his head should be bigger with the hand the size it is. Otherwise, this is very good!
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- the_darkdragon_lives - 05/28/2009
- Maybe the positions of the nose and the ear are a little bit off? That is AWESOME by the way!
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- singxawayuki - 01/30/2009
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the vampire's mouth kinda bugs me. xD
the girl's facial expression really fits though. great job =) - Report As Spam
- XxX-Taka-XxX - 01/30/2009
- The thing that's wrong with the head: Give it more volume. make the edge of his head a bit taller, and he'll look like he has a full head. Otherwise, great
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- Mon Amour Antoinette - 01/15/2009
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haha, i'll bet your art teacher was like "WTF??"
i love how you can see the true pain in her face
but the vampire's hand and mouth bug me
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