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  • Yukiko (My OC)
  • Title: Yukiko (My OC)
  • Artist: Sakura Shiratsuki
  • Description: It's my neopet. I entered this in the BC.
    THIS IS MY OC, not USHIO FROM THE GENTLEMEN'S ALLIANCE + / SHINSHI DOUMEI +

    And if it is a little squished, it should be, because it was once bigger than this, but when I resized this, everything smooshed together a little.

    And the eye is supposed to be low. It's the style.
  • Date: 11/27/2008
  • Tags: yukiko ushio amamiya angel originalcharacter
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • CCChocolat - 11/29/2008
  • It looks like the eye's a little low, and the head's a little small in the back. If you were doing a sorta half-avi art, the wings would be okay because I know there's an item like that, but otherwise, I agree with javagrl. She's adorable, but you can definitely make her more so. And Missus Sakura-right-below-me, contructive criticism is a good thing!
  • LostJavaBytes - 11/27/2008
  • the head is too tall and thin... and the wings are too small to do anything..... i realize that you were probably trying to make them visible as wings, but it just made them look too small. the shoulder is mis-formed... other than that, i love the colors and the way you did the shading and light... yea. my critisism, hopes it'll help 3nodding

    comment and rate back?
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