- Title: Piano Wire
- Artist: Soti
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Description:
She took a quick look around the corner... a guard was walking up near the hallway.
"Have you found the lab yet?" Rat's voice could be heard through the little headset.
"No."
"Have they found you out yet Jen?"
"No..." She replied through gritted teeth. The guard was walking a bit closer but he hadn't heard her yet... Thank God!
"You can't let them figure out you're there. Once that alarm goes off then we're-"
"Shut up and let me do my job Rat!" She scowled and twisted the piano wire a li - Date: 04/12/2004
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Comments (7 Comments)
- SexehNeko - 02/14/2009
- Wow. Looks pretty good ^^
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- xX Broken-Dark-Angel Xx - 08/10/2008
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One word: WOW!
Okay, now more words: That looks
like a pro drew it! The description... IT'S SO
COOL! You should write a book about her! And
you'd already have the cover art! It would be
terrible not to give you a ten! - Report As Spam
- Hannah_Montanna900 - 07/27/2008
- cool XD!
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- chessmasterkha - 07/13/2008
- good work
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- elektra200 - 07/13/2008
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oh and also.. make the suit a little big.. that
way she can have room to mover her legs easily but
make the pants smnall enough so she cant trip over
them but otherwisei give u a 10! - Report As Spam
- elektra200 - 07/13/2008
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wow very well done i like the way u put in the
story u can understand wut the pic is about if u
put a story with it and great shading bett u
passed 5th grade easy huh? lolz very nicely done
and maybe try makin her suit a litttle more
powerfull.. ex. maybe add some technology.. or
somethin that gives her a more powerfull look.
liek she can kill u just stsring at u. but
otherwise very well done and maybe try thinkin
bout bein a writer! ur good jsut as i am! - Report As Spam
- xxtsukinoxx - 07/05/2008
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nice smile i think i would make the face in her head
a little smaller? x3 - Report As Spam
