- by Johnny_Banananas |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 12/28/2008 |
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- Title: Sobakasu!
- Artist: Johnny_Banananas
- Description: A art piece of someones avvi, plan to use it as one of my examples in my upcoming art shop =/ I actually messed up on the hair, there isn't suppose to be any red in the hair but due to technical difficulties...there was haha. He suppose to be riding the Gimping Motorcycle. And pleas,e I appreciate Comments more than votes, so I can be critique and learn what to fix in the future!
- Date: 12/28/2008
- Tags: sobakasu motorcycle
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Respectable Reason - 12/29/2008
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its too sketchy try to use one linefor a pert instead of tons and it would look better. when you do that it looks like you took five minutes doing that look at my stuff i have a sketchy style but i know how to get rid of it
well you asked for crituque and i gave u it
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- Nerai Kentouken - 12/28/2008
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Ah, It is a tad bit too sketchy. Well, it does not take away from the drawing itself, just gives off a messy feeling. I would advise you do what i call "Finalizeing" simply you make everything as neat as possable, re-draw sketchy lines, and fix minor blunders. in essence, its a fine piece of art, i'll go ahead and give it a 5/5 ^-^
Take a look at my Drawings, I hope you post and vote good for me! - Report As Spam
- Curly whirly - 12/28/2008
- good =]
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