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  • Title: Lilly Vellum
  • Artist: Clover Renevatio
  • Description: Just one of my original characters. Also my first completed picture of the new year. c:

    Please don't post comments telling me that I should add shading to this or color or whatever because I'd like to leave this as lineart.

    And please describe why you've rated this picture as you have because I'd love to know what I'm doing wrong so I can improve.
  • Date: 01/02/2009
  • Tags: lilly vellum
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Hope_Yamanota - 09/28/2009
  • the face is great, the body needs work though my friend, (as in teh shoulders and arms)
    put some more clothes on her ^^
    other than that good job! <3
  • Aya_Natsume864 - 03/06/2009
  • Okay, I see exactly what's wrong with it, and its not major. the shoulders are too wide, the arms need to be closer to her body, if you fixed that, it would be perfect! Beautiful, 5/5
  • Trinity Saber - 01/03/2009
  • The face is really pretty. But the clothes make the sholders and stuff look abit strange, the arms need to be alittle wider.
    But its really good<3
    4/5
  • xX_Zara_Xx - 01/02/2009
  • ignore caperman who doesn't even know that its 'anime' (which is derived from animation -.-; wink
    Everything is great and I give you a 4/5 because I find the arms to be too skinny -at least to me they are- but if its your style then its great. ^^
    also the eyes are off on the face. They're really going over to the right of the face. at the most, the effect should be reversed, as in they should to closer to the left side instead
  • Clover Renevatio - 01/02/2009
  • Actually her breasts aren't that massive, they're around a full b-cup/small c-cup. Either way I'm not quite sure how you see this as an anime style, care to elaborate?
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