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  • Title: Mermaid
  • Artist: FoxLoverAmorri
  • Description: Ok, I know she's not exactly eye-popping, but I like the way her tail cam out.

    Any suggestions for improvements? Thanks! :)
  • Date: 01/30/2009
  • Tags: mermaidgreenunderwaterwaterscales
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • ii Toxic_Markers ii - 07/02/2009
  • smaller head but the rest is perfect! man i wish i could draw hands like that >_< myine are usualy behind something in my drawings because i suck at life when it comes to hands >_<
    5/5& faved ^_^
  • Ookami_Same - 02/02/2009
  • The tail is lovely. The only downfall to the piece is proportionality issues. Hands are 3/4 the legth of the head, the elbow falls at the waist, and your fingertips reach halfway between your knee and hip. Those are tips for arm proportion, which you have perfect other than the hand size. The head should always be drawn first. If you draw the head too big and the rest of the body won't fit on the page unless you squish it on there, then re-draw the head smaller. PM or comment me for more tips.
  • heartofsteal - 02/02/2009
  • Like what the other peoples said, great tail. Her head is pretty big, almost the size of her torso.
    And on her left hand, i think you left out the thumb...unless her thumb is under the rest of her fingers o-o.
  • Kai Luna - 01/30/2009
  • I love how you patterned her tail. Musta taken a long time.
    My advice is squish her face in more;its too long.
 
 
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