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  • S h i n i g a m i Kai-Kun
  • Title: S h i n i g a m i Kai-Kun
  • Artist: Kannon Masamune
  • Description: Second bit of art in 2-3 years. Some rust wearing off, still a long ways to go however. As always, commentary and constructive criticism is encouraged. Some flaws are obvious, but sometimes people can point out issues that I didn't notice myself.

    Notes on how my art is done. It is drawn in pencil, then inked, scanned, and colored in photoshop.
  • Date: 04/20/2009
  • Tags: kaikun
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Luna_of_Irony - 04/24/2009
  • The arms are to thin and maybe too short. The bikini thing doesnt curve right with the thighs. Do you see what i mean by that? It should curve around the hip. As Rainy said, it looks too masculine. I don't like the size of the mouth; the face sorta ruins the whole picture. Great detail, though.
  • Rainy Day Mizchyfe - 04/23/2009
  • I do see more texture and detail in this one than the other. I do think you could improve both drawings by choosing a more feminine stance or pose for your subjects. At first glance i thought it was the body that looked masculine, but its not really, its the position the body is in. I do love the detail and attention you gave to the wings, staff, and flame though. Good Job!
    C>C>Rain
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