- Title: Mignights Flight Chara Nari
- Artist: Mini o 3o
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Description:
This is my Shugo Chara, Cecile's Chara Nari, Midnights Flight With Her Guardian Chara Luneris.
The reference picture shows Luneris with a glowing star in her hand.
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Critique Me? - Date: 05/10/2009
- Tags: mignights flight chara nari
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Mini o 3o - 05/17/2009
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- nursal1060 - 05/16/2009
- OH WOW!
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- DigitalMami - 05/16/2009
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i glowing star look way good
but the face is a little plain
because the star is glowing
from beneth her face you
could add some shadows
that you get from have a flash light under
the face but less intence
also the thigh is a bit wrong
goods good other than that - Report As Spam
- Mini o 3o - 05/16/2009
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Thanks for critiquing me on my drawing.
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- Classical Teen - 05/16/2009
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She's lovely Mini.
<3
I'd point out one tiny thing, the upper thigh of her left leg is a little. . . off. As for the shading on the skin, I think it needs to be darker.
I do love how you can tell the stars shining! :'D
I also think the skirt looks fine just, smooth it out a little bit more. c:
MY LAST CRITIQUE!
The collar of the dress/top if it's supposed to be tight at the collar bone, that's great, but if not then I'd give it some "volume". Lift some of it up. - Report As Spam
- L0veIy - 05/14/2009
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Its really good, and I have to say the shading in the hair is absolutly phenomenal.
As for critique:
She shading on the skin could use a bit more work, a few more shades to make the skin seem more 'alive'. The face needs a lot more shading too, I think the shade you used was a tad to light for the face.
The outfit looks pretty good but the skirt looks a tiny bit stiff, I would suggest curving the bottom of the ruffles a bit more. I'd also add a few more shades of purple to the bottom. GREAT<3 - Report As Spam
- icyxchan - 05/13/2009
- mini chan ish the best >3
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