- Title: 022 Mother Nature
- Artist: Idene
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Description:
022, of the 100 Themes Challenge on Deviantart.
... Not much to say, besides if you are going to say 'it sucks', say 'it sucks, improve on this, and here's a suggestion' or however you want to say it. Please, constructive criticism is extremely helpful. - Date: 07/01/2009
- Tags: mother nature angel vines desert
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Idene - 07/04/2009
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@Fine Young Iman: Fufufufufu.
@ladystardustt: yeah, i have to work on my shading. the drawing i'm working on now, i'm definitely going to do a lot of effort into shading it, and shading it accurately. and i need to work on pronouncing i guess you could say, hips and whatnot. I like the face how it is, but what i was aiming to draw, if i failed to, was the face, not quite in the profile, but slightly off. thanks for the advice! - Report As Spam
- ladystardustt - 07/03/2009
- Could definitely use some shading, especially on the wings. That's the major thing this drawing is lacking. Anatomy-wise, the way you drew the face is kind of distracting, not realistic at all. And she could have more defined hips. But other than that, I think this is pretty good.
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- Fine Young Iman - 07/03/2009
- kukukukuku
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- Idene - 07/02/2009
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@Kage: Thanks. i like her right hand, but the one next to the flower gave me some, well, quite a bit of trouble. >_<
@D4rkins: Thanks. Yeah, but the noses are a bit of my style. I tend to give girls sharper noses and guys more roundey noses. But thanks for the tip.
@SimKidd3000: Thanks. and yeah, i think what it is with my coloring, is that i need to do skin tones more, because right now, she's rather flat color wise. i know her wings are. >_< oy. thanks for the comment. - Report As Spam
- Sim Kidd 3000 - 07/02/2009
- well, it's not rough, but it's not professional, altogether it's so so smile
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- Lady Tainted - 07/02/2009
- If you want to make it more realistic you could make the nose not so sharp, but its good overall =] probably a 4
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- Kage Tatsumaru - 07/01/2009
- Not bad. The hand shape could use improvement, and her outstreched arm seems kinda thick.
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