- Title: Clown/Mime
- Artist: Allatez
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Description:
I drew this 2 days ago (July 13th) of my avi when it was dressed like that, this is honestly the best ive drawn so far (im still learning) please give some nice criticism of what i could to improve.
I colored it with colored pencils btw. - Date: 07/15/2009
- Tags: clownmime
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Amaya_Hinageshi - 07/12/2011
- downward curve in the shoulder blades. Try making them look more prominent. otherwise, pitch perfect! 5/5!!
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- Amaya_Hinageshi - 07/12/2011
- In some ways, you're much better than me. the legs, hips, and lower arms are much better than I can do... also, the neck and collar-bone is very nice looking and your shading is almost perfect. If it were me though, I'd try to work on the upper torso by giving it a bit more curve under the... you know... also, I would try to put less c
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- Player Shino - 03/20/2010
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@Culen..Good God. You do better o-e;
I like this a lot. 5/5 for sure. Ignore the rude people c: - Report As Spam
- xoxcheriesesxox - 02/23/2010
- Holy some rude people and others who obviously shouldnt be giving criticism >.> Watch your body composition. practice drawing random objects as you see them to steady your hand, watch your sugar and caffien levels as well and youll do just fine hun wink
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- bryson_the_bison - 11/03/2009
- would have looked nicer had you colored it in a digital studio
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- X-Razorbladekiss - 08/21/2009
- woah that scared the heck outta me :O its good u will improve keep practicing.
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- celina culen - 07/17/2009
- learn how to draw eyes better u kinda suck a comic book would help
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