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  • Japanese Schoolgirl
  • Title: Japanese Schoolgirl
  • Artist: shuukaaku
  • Description: I was trying to redraw a picture that I saw in a manga drawing book of a japanese schoolgirl. Tell me if you think it needs work, and what to work on, etc.

    Constructive criticizm, people!


    p.s. it's just a sketch that i drew in 10 minutes so it's not all cleaned up and stuff...
    p.s.s. please comment what you think and what you rated! thank you!
  • Date: 07/21/2009
  • Tags: japanese schoolgirl
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • mtdewgirl622 - 07/23/2009
  • you should make the body longer and work on the eye a bit more. otherwise, it's really good for only 10 min
  • jeccazn - 07/21/2009
  • hmm.. you should make the top body longer and shorten the legs (like what the other dude said lol).

    other than that, it's VERRRYY goood biggrin
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