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  • KawaiiXKyoko
  • Title: KawaiiXKyoko
  • Artist: -Dessumi-
  • Description: Play boy bunny at chur service ;3
  • Date: 07/23/2009
  • Tags: kawaii kyoko
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Tentens Legacy - 09/17/2009
  • Urk. The neck. And I don't know why they don't approve... it's just a drawing... unless it's the 'at church service' line?... 4/5...
  • Uriel Ledon - 07/25/2009
  • Well I think it's very nice! Those others are just. Ok true but I think minor issues. Except the neck. That's my only major issue.
  • Kate-Munstah - 07/23/2009
  • Also, adding shades and shadows in the hair, skin, eyes, etc. would give the picture a more realistic feel.
    Her boobs are too far out to the side. It would look better if they were a little lower too.
    Her torso's too skinny and long and it looks like she has no hips. :/
    Otherwise, very nice and keep practicing.
  • Kate-Munstah - 07/23/2009
  • You can find some great tutorials for pencil blending on DeviantART.
    Her eyes seem a bit big but that's pretty much classic anime. Maybe give them some more shape.
    also, her chin isn't directly under the middle of her mouth like it should be No matter what angle the head is at, the tip of the chin will always be directly under the middle of the mouth
    Her neck is too skinny and too long It seems like it would break under the girl's head Check out other pictures for help on human anatomy
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