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- | Submitted on 08/08/2009 |
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- Title: -critiques, tips requested-
- Artist: GAlA Site Assistant
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Description:
sorry it's so sketchy (i need to fix that), i did it all in pen. This s the second time i drew anime kissing so i know it's terrible I'm so ashamed (the first time was a disaster) but i would love any critiques comments tips anything really. This is Scarlet and Eli, two of my OC's.
please check out my other art entries and critique those also if you're not too busy - Date: 08/08/2009
- Tags: critiques tips requested anime manga
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- Able Edible-Heart - 08/11/2009
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Tips? Work proportions a bit The one on the left is much smaller than the one on the right And despite height differences it still looks awkward
Try smoothing out the lips Instead of lines try curving them more When doing the hair in pen you don't need to do as many lines Just do a decent amount going down and try going through the lines in one stroke instead of stopping and continuing
one on the lefts eye is too close to the nose
very good improve a bit on those things to make it even better - Report As Spam
