- by moon_farie_2008 |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 09/26/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: anime hope u like
- Artist: moon_farie_2008
- Description: i hope to be like the artis amy brown some day
- Date: 09/26/2009
- Tags: anime hope like
- Report Post
Comments (5 Comments)
- XxSakuraXPlushiexX - 06/21/2010
- This is not anime. This should be with fairies. If it's supposed to be anime, try doing something like Legend of Zelda, Fire Emblem, or maybe even InuYasha and Bleach.
- Report As Spam
- Anthely - 10/26/2009
- I agree with The-Dark_Paligin, I'll also try to offer some advice of the kindly sort. First, I like the idea, the pose, and the costume. If the bauble she's holding is supposed to be a sphere, I recommend using a stencil, or just practicing circles. I don't think she needs the semicircles under her eyes. If they are smile lines, make them shallower/ a gentler curve. I think you only need to show 2 fingers, where you have 4 together right now. I would try to simplify the mouth too. Good job!
- Report As Spam
- The-Dark-Paligin - 09/30/2009
-
i find the comments a bit harsh here with no actual comments on HOW to improve this. i think it is a good picture but you need to simplify the face. it's mostly the nose where you got this wrong. noses on manga women are usually, if they are young, a small curved line for the tip of the nose. i say look at your favourite manga/anime characters for refrences
i hope this was helpful ^^ - Report As Spam
- TangLime - 09/28/2009
- ... anime? umm number 1 anime is TV shows and 2 this is aming towards realistic and NEEDS LOTSA WORK!
- Report As Spam
- Tora_Tiger_Yuri - 09/26/2009
- Needs improvement
- Report As Spam
