- Title: Automaton
- Artist: Mrfalco
- Description: A simple automaton, long abandoned on some forgotten rock in the corner of the universe, repaired recently by a skilled technician's hand. It seems to have no external influence, acting of it's own accord.
- Date: 10/13/2009
- Tags: robot automaton sentient
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Comments (3 Comments)
- CapedNinja - 01/11/2010
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Not bad. But since I specialize in mechas, I can say this:
Improve the left arm. And put the weapon side in the foreground because everyone's interested in the weapon, not a plain old arm. And remember to show what connects each joint; don't just cover it up. - Report As Spam
- Electric_Catfish - 10/14/2009
- Try using solid lines for the lineart; it will give it a more 'stable' look, as opposed to such sketchy one. Also, try drawing bigger! I would love to see some of the details that we're missing at this smaller size.
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- xxDArKStALk3rxx - 10/13/2009
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very good^^
it looks destructive XD - Report As Spam
