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  • Doodle in my free time
  • Title: Doodle in my free time
  • Artist: sorry im a squirrel
  • Description: My first attempt at a girl in this style... I rarely draw in this style D: and I haven't been drawing in a loong time.. her left foot is mangled! :x and the angle of her eyes/placement is off too... T__T sigh. Oh well. Critiques are welcomed! :)
  • Date: 12/15/2010
  • Tags: doodle girl longlegs skirt first
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • sorry im a squirrel - 12/22/2010
  • Tiskri- I'll think about the bangs/eye thing, and I think the lack of shading is because of my camera angle xD It's a lot darker irl mad Thank you though!
    Arisu- Thank you smile yeaa, I got those comments from other people too. I'll work on it! c:
    Teardrops- yess, I hate drawing hands xD
  • NerdyCheese - 12/22/2010
  • i like it same gos for me when im drawing with the eyes i always have a tough time with the legs T^T and hands the most
  • Arisu Moriko - 12/18/2010
  • I love the style you drew this picture! I agree with the foot being mangled but I also think the proportion is a little off. Her legs shouldn't be so long and she should have a little longer mid section. :3
  • Taborix - 12/16/2010
  • I think half her eye shouldn't be seen because of her bangs and you should keep the shading equal for the whole picture. At the bottom her legs look like they're fading. I agree that you should fix the foot but besides that it's perfect. You should try adding a background to that. 5/5.
 
 
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