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  • Beautiful Day
  • Title: Beautiful Day
  • Artist: KoushakuX
  • Description: Okay sooo this was another avi request only this time was a hair experiment and I started playing with clouds. Hope you guys like it. Even if just a little bit lol :D
  • Date: 09/28/2012
  • Tags: beautifulskyclouds
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • KoushakuX - 09/29/2012
  • Hmm... Well although it was just a test I appreciate the feedback. The lack of detail and unnatural pose is most likely due the fact I paid little attention to them and focused more on what I was concerned with. But thank your for the criticism and I will keep it in mind for future request.
  • Soojin123 - 09/28/2012
  • overall, it's nice. Figured I could provide some constructive criticism [character limits fml]
    -hair: shade the upper part more. while detailed, it lacks depth.
    -chest/arm: well..having your chest push through your arm like that would not be comfortable or natural. either that, or i actually dont understand the female body
    -waist: shading on right side (our left) seems to have been lost..
    -legs: area from knee to calf looks slightly unnatural.
    just trying to help you improve, no offense intended
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