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On Christmas Eve Santa was coming to town
but unfortuntely the North Pole was down. eek
A little elf Max fiddled with wire
then was fired.
Santa was mad evil
the children were sad.
They couldn't see Santa
so they only drank Fanta.
Because the all the milk was spilled wahmbulance
by little baby Hilled.
They watched the night sky until the clock rang rolleyes
but only heard a little pang.
In the North Pole Santa was in a fit scream
then a soultion hit.
Rudolph saved the day
everyone yelled hey!
We could use Rudolph's nose
it withstands other foes! redface
Away they flew
to the town of Snog-a-boo. cool
Ho,Ho,Ho!
- by xXx-koi-xXx |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Acentdent on Christmas Eve
- Artist: xXx-koi-xXx
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Description:
North Pole went down
Who saves the day?
Find out!
(It's good) - Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: christmas rudolph santa children
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Aokina - 09/18/2010
- It sounded more like a children's poet. If you want to be one, great job if you dont, I think it needs to come from your heart more
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- Quiescent Night - 07/26/2010
- its ok not bad but not great either
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- The Photogenic Frenchfry - 09/04/2009
- It rhymes, but it doesn't have rhythm.
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- Insane Victorian - 08/11/2009
- I like it 5/5
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- xRockstar 202x - 02/18/2009
- very clever =]
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