- by Anthony Addison |
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- | Submitted on 11/09/2009 |
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- Title: Red River
- Artist: Anthony Addison
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Description:
You should see,
If you close your eyes,
All you've said,
Are lies upon lies.
A mask worn deep,
The lies make you shiver,
Soon you should be,
Crying a red river.
[ Besides that, hope you all like my attempt at making a poem, and an avatar~ ] - Date: 11/09/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Anthony Addison - 11/29/2009
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That's like saying the eyes aren't noticeable.
Either way, I've stopped caring since that last post. xD - Report As Spam
- Vintage Puppet - 11/29/2009
- You said yourself it is about making good looking avatars. I don't think this entry falls under that category sadly. The ribbons do not match the other reds, the SMALL tears in your pants do not apply since they are barely noticeable. The shirt and shoes do not match in shade either. And it isn't called being a bad sport, there is a comment section for a reason. It is for people to voice their opinions, and in this case, some opinions are negative. Just a part of winning.
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- Innamoratae - 11/29/2009
- I think it's lovely, and well deserving of the place it got. I'm particularly fond of the shadowed effect you have on the face. What item is that, may I ask? Only question: are the head skulls and the ribbon under them separate or apart?
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- iClash-x - 11/29/2009
- i second Trepador i dont think it deserved 2nd
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- Trepador - 11/28/2009
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Exactly how did this win second?
The reds don't even match. - Report As Spam
- DimpleDolly - 11/28/2009
- Awww I like this!! <3 Glad it got second (:
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