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- | Submitted on 01/16/2010 |
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- Title: Fire Element
- Artist: Nothingnothing000
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Description:
A dancing of flames,the flicker of light...
Such a tantilizing,hypnotic site...
Reflection of fire bathing all in vicinity in innocent golden light...
But be not fool,she is cold,she is cruel,she is heartless and heedless of plight...
Flighty and quick,she'll devour all you love,your life on site...
So be weary the fire,wild and untamed,or you may find yourself inflamed...
If you rate me anything below a 5 please comment on why so I can improve. : ) - Date: 01/16/2010
- Tags: fire element flame light heat
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Comments (7 Comments)
- noneofthebigthings - 01/24/2010
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Only thing i dont like is the heart!
4/5
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- Kuro Krusnik - 01/22/2010
- I really like the poem.
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- Tiina Brown - 01/22/2010
- dislike the hole in the chest too much. sorry ..... maybe.
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- Rachel the Lunar Warrior - 01/20/2010
- i like it, and the poems great to, it gives you an extra point, so u get a 5...love the poem plz rate back
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- Gimpeh - 01/20/2010
- Wow, 5/5 ^^
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- Dale Da Snowman - 01/20/2010
- OMG your beautiful 5/5 no seconds thoughts hands down.
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- Shimshon - 01/20/2010
- 5/5 i like the coloring! btw, what item gives that heart in her chest?
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