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  • Title: ~ Missing You ~
  • Artist: Crystane
  • Description: Dreaming of you,as the leaves fall on us like rain, the wind kicks up and the only sound is their rustling overhead and under foot.
    For you to take me as I am, with my issues and my flaws
    Pull me to your chest without a hesitation or a pause.
    Longing for you, a thousand miles beyond this sun-steeped wall
    Somewhere where the waves creep cool along the sand,
    The ebbing tide forsakes the listless land.
  • Date: 01/31/2010
  • Tags: missing
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Rainy Day Mizchyfe - 02/08/2010
  • Soooo glad this placed! I love it. Its a lovely theme, and well executed and the poem is a work of art in its own right. Congrats to one of my fave artists. <333
  • Social Bondage - 02/08/2010
  • On a purely aesthetic and emotional level, I enjoy this. The coat interacts well with your simulation of wind. The hair is a pleasant shade which fits the atmosphere. However, the skin color would be better suited creating contrast to the hair and coat. As of now, it seems to be an awkward extension of the collar.

    Ultimately, on a functional/skill level, this is very simplistic.
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