- by BTS -BeyondTheStars- |
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- | Submitted on 07/04/2010 |
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- Title: Twisted Wandering
- Artist: BTS -BeyondTheStars-
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Description:
Twisted wandering in the dark.
No guides of lipstick mark.
The path distorted up and down.
Pale face marred by concentrated frown.
Not easy even if the path is seen.
To reach the end by strike thirteen.
Yeah it's lame poetry, but I didn't know what to write and people always seem to want a story...
It's a blind lady wandering through the endless mazes of Escher's print. I tried to reference the movie Labyrinth (the lipstick marks) in the poem, but I don't think it worked. - Date: 07/04/2010
- Tags: twisted wandering dark black blind
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Zephyr1994 - 07/11/2010
- WOW amazing 5/5
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- Skweetlez - 07/10/2010
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I love it
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- The Lady Andromeda - 07/07/2010
- Poetry is good, I don't know how well the background flows, but it definitley matches with the theme of the avatar. 4/5
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- PanicSoon - 07/06/2010
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It's not lame poetry, it's awesome poetry~! You did a great job.
Could you come up with something that fits my username for a signature? You don't have too... - Report As Spam
- Desthild - 07/05/2010
- rating back mine ofcourse
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- Desthild - 07/05/2010
- OMG my wife you want to know why i call you that see my avatar btw 5/5
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- Freya the Neko - 07/05/2010
- The poetry was awesome. A well deserved 5/5. Please rate and comment back.
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