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  • Title: Twisted Wandering
  • Artist: BTS -BeyondTheStars-
  • Description: Twisted wandering in the dark.
    No guides of lipstick mark.
    The path distorted up and down.
    Pale face marred by concentrated frown.
    Not easy even if the path is seen.
    To reach the end by strike thirteen.

    Yeah it's lame poetry, but I didn't know what to write and people always seem to want a story...
    It's a blind lady wandering through the endless mazes of Escher's print. I tried to reference the movie Labyrinth (the lipstick marks) in the poem, but I don't think it worked.
  • Date: 07/04/2010
  • Tags: twisted wandering dark black blind
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • PanicSoon - 07/06/2010
  • It's not lame poetry, it's awesome poetry~! You did a great job.

    Could you come up with something that fits my username for a signature? You don't have too...
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