- Title: White's Remembrance
- Artist: Panumbra
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Description:
With a gaze as clear as crystal, the memory comes to light.
A piercing gaze of truth belies the smallest and whitest of lies.
It remembers it oh so well, like a childhood story retold,
countless times again, again, the memories of old.
White remembers. - Date: 12/23/2010
- Tags: whitesremembrancepanumbra
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Panumbra - 01/02/2011
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- WinniePooP - 01/02/2011
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i think this is really good
5/5 smile - Report As Spam
- Panumbra - 12/31/2010
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Thanks for the constructive criticism Oral and Daughter of Tepes. I can appreciate your willingness to help me improve upon an idea. smile
Though, I'm no trying for a monochrome avatar. D: - Report As Spam
- Eveegguy - 12/30/2010
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If you're going to do a monochromatic design, I recommend more items since it will hide any glaring shading contrasts. You don't have that many items, so the differences in shades becomes gawking. Also, many others try these kinds of ideas and fail as well. I've seen better, but I've also seen worse.
2/5 for the effort. - Report As Spam
- OraI Fixation - 12/30/2010
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I agree, the hair isn't the right shade of white, but it is still white.
Items are usually hard to find the right shades of so its great that the shades you have are similar. I enjoyed the "Description" and how it matches the avi. Just one mistake does not deserve a 1/5.
Just because someone has no clothing on doesn't really matter either. I would give you a 5/5 x3 - Report As Spam
- Panumbra - 12/30/2010
- So, if my avatar has no clothes, it automatically fails? Wow, what a thoughtful and useful critic you are. You really think I deserve a 1/5 as compared to so many others here? Spite just makes you look silly.
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