- Title: Lunar Countess
- Artist: Balbora
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Description:
this is my lunar countess without the item.
story:
The countess is visiting earth and stares at night at the moon. That makes her homesick heart so sad she cried but then she had a brilliant idea: she caught a beam of moonlight and carries it all the time. So she won't get homesick anymore. - Date: 09/21/2013
- Tags: lunar countess
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Balbora - 09/26/2013
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ok, so this was a comment that helps^^ thx :3
as 4 the ball of light... i didn't notice myself maybe bc i knew it was there. the eyeshadow and the lips r one item but to me they don't look that weird surprised
and i'm no good storyteller xD sry - Report As Spam
- Kestrad - 09/25/2013
- I like the concept and the color scheme. I think most of the avatar is very pretty, but her expression seems really strange. I think it's the combination of the eyeshadow with those lips. The lips look super weird here for some reason. Also, the background completely eats the ball of light she's holding--I couldn't tell that was there at all, and it was only by luck that I saw it. The story could also use some work, to make it more interesting. Try telling it in fewer but more descriptive words.
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- Balbora - 09/24/2013
- would the downvoters b so kind to give me a reason..?
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