"...nothing" she softly replied. "no...say it" he didn't know what was possessing him now as he asked her...but something earked his insides to hear what she wanted to say." how do u feel about me Gale?" the question stunned her momentarily but she responded all the same." i think your a pompous pig who doesn't give damn about his friends...barely anyone knew..." tears threatened to fall again as she walked away from him, a churning sensation destroying her stomach."...i never meant any harm...you of all people could highly understand ...IM SORRY!!!" gale stood their frozen for a good 6 seconds...he RARELY apologized sincerely...and this was one of them..."gale...i feel for you like no other person in my life...its weird...i think i....." he stopped in his words. staring at gale hauntingly." David?"he looked at the ground in embarrassment."gale....do you...love me....even a little?"....gale stared at him longingly.".....if you hadn't left....sure as hell...now i don't know...because im in love with someone else..."
~*EXCITED CHAPTER 3 COMING L8TR*~
- Title: chapter 2
- Artist: orimaku
- Description: second chapter...MORE DRAMA!!!
- Date: 10/17/2008
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- kovujackson - 10/17/2008
DUDE!!!! SUSPENSE!!!! this is the only one i've read and im already hooked. my only suggestion is to separate the dialogue and the descriptions like "talk talk" he said
then on a new line "talk " she replied you know?
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