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This wasn't the way it had alwlays been. I had once been someone. I had a family, and i had a life. But then, that one fateful day, that all disappeared.
No one had told me what I was. But no one had predicted that I would Demonize so soon after my tenth birthday. I had arrived home, soon after school. Mother was in the kitchen, talking to her friend over the phone. Father was in the yard, with Lilly, my sister. "Mother... I feel funny." i had told her, dumping my books in a chair. She hung up and walked over, placing her cold hand on my forehead. "You don't have a temperature. It's probobly nothing Alice." We had dismissed it as such. Father and Lilly had soon come inside for dinner. Just as we were finishing, a sudden pain in my head jolted me from my fullness. I was suddenly so hungry, as if i hadn't eaten at all. It grew hot and my breath quickened. "ALice? What is it now?" Lilly asked, bordly shuffling through her CDs. I grasped my stomach. A lightning jolt shot up my spine and my feet went numb. I leaned forward, squinching my eyes shut. Drool leaked from my open mouth. I shook wildly as the hunger continued. "Alice? What's wrong?" father asked, knealing beside me. "Rose, call an ambulence!" i turned to him. He grabbed my shoulders and looked at me worridly and asked me once again what was wrong. Tears flowed from my blood-shot eyes as i leaned forward. "I'm so sorry." i wispered in his ear. Before he could pull away, i bit his neck, tearing the muscle from the coller bone, blood spilling everywere. My mother screamed. Lilly cried. ~~From there, i had torn flesh from bone, and skin from ligaments. I ate at first. But i soon grew full. The rest of our small town, i cut the tendons on their ankles so they couldn't escape.
Now, I am inexile. I can't live with myself, much less anyone else. I look ahead. Not to the misty feild infront of me, but to the future. If i didn't, would i even be here at all?
- by FlashFire Phoenix |
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- | Submitted on 10/20/2008 |
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- Title: Burning Inside and Out *ch. 1*
- Artist: FlashFire Phoenix
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Description:
Hi! So, if you don't like slightly bloody stuff, please, don't read this. But, i swear, it won't be that bad.... i guess...
I came up with this at random, it was like 9.00 at night.
I hope you enjoy. (if you did, there's more to come) - Date: 10/20/2008
- Tags: burning inside demonize
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Comments (7 Comments)
- finer moon star - 12/24/2008
- wow... i really llike it! i didn't realize where the beginning of this new story was... but here it is... glorifull and all!! lol
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- -RaBid-CaRl-On-The-loOse- - 10/26/2008
- Thats cool I like how you start the beginning as a flash back!
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- bstar955 - 10/25/2008
- i love your storie even the blood and gore part
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- FlashFire Phoenix - 10/25/2008
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How do I come up with it?
welll... I thought to myself, "I wonder what people would think of something i submitted..." so i sat there for a minute, then, *poof* the idea poppes up and i write it down.
i was so supprised when people said they liked that. I had thought people would be "Ewwww... Blood is so nasty. A story about a cheerleader is cooler than a story about a troubled girl with complex problems!! OMG!" lol. i didn't actually think that. *ok, so i did* - Report As Spam
- R A I N I I D I - 10/22/2008
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wow, thanks for the comment! ^^ now..
about yours...a few errors in spelling and...other wise..
its absolutely wonderfull! how can you come up with this? it takes a while for me i give you a 5/5 cuase i love blood and goor, ect..
but i dont know why i write romance, and other love like stuff. any ways nice job! ^^ im going to work on somthing right now tho. - Report As Spam
- Fairest_of_the_Fallen - 10/20/2008
- sweet, sumthing with a little blood and gore in it
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- sheisse - 10/20/2008
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oh, thats cool ^^
make anothr! - Report As Spam