I wonder...

• Artist: yuu_yuri
• Description: Written at the spur of the moment. When i couldn't speak to the person i love for more then a few days. This was written after they knew i loved them, but not being able to say it to them, kind of ate me up. So this relieved that 'torturous' feeling of unspoken words. be kind >_<
• Date: 10/28/2008
• Tags: wonder

Will your eyes sparkle at night, when I tell you what I’m thinking? Will you still be smiling? I’m trying not to scare myself, not to scare you. I don’t know what to do. I’m drawing a blank. I’m laughing to myself. Looking down, watching you sleep beside me. I can’t help but think, we might be perfect for each other. Do you think of me in that way? What do you see me as?

I can’t have my heart torn, but I want to give it to you so badly. I won’t say it. I want to say it though, and so badly. I’ll burst if I don’t. I can’t help but smile. Maybe even laugh a little. Let it fade. Let the smile fade as I start to think of your answers. What will you do? Do I say it? I’m tearing myself apart. I want to, but what will you say? What will you do?

Comments

[Greasy Carebear]

Aww, the terrible feeling of never getting to tell that one person how you truly feel and the constant fear of rejection once it is said.......those emotions are captured very well in your writing. Keep up the good work.

[Sow It Up K i d]

i LOVE ^^ it 5/5

[cry_102]

i see you've been writing this piece with emotion....nice

[Cirkus de la Freek]

You wrote that at the spur of the moment? You are really creative! You should write more things like that!

[Fayne Darkness]

really not bad...i could see you had emotions in there...4 stars

[pARTiEanimal]

Not bad, you show lots of emotion =) It could just be me, but it looks like it would work better as a poem

[winterwolf212]

5 shiny stars for u!