• toms point of view:
    i dont remember what happened , because it all happened so fast. i was in the dairy bar and i here a guy say "put your hands up and dont move.'' then a gunfire , next thing i knew elroy was dead .
    elroy was a nice kid he never knew someone was out to get him for his money , and his girl. He had a girlfriend named sally , and was very rich indeed.
    he was the kind of person who would give up all that hard cold cash to a poor person just to get him out of the cold( he even brought one home and asked to keep it as a pet) .
    but someone hated him , that person was a man by the name of allen douglas. The bad type he took drugs and smoked and stole things from people right under there noses. he had a deadley plot to kill this boy this kid named elroy.
    this is my story about what happened ..........


    i was walking home one day and i stopped in the general store to get a snack .
    i went in and browsed in the sections when i saw my buddy elroy
    " whats up man?" i asked him ,
    " nothing much just chillin " elroy said
    "so waiting for sally ?'' i asked
    " ya "he said
    all of a sudden sally walked in and allen just pushes her aside and screams
    " put your hands up, dont move"
    and next thing i know elroy was dead .
    sally ran over to him and cried .
    the police came and they put tape around elroy . his mom showed up and cried . everyone was crying . even me. i was elroys best friend .
    i swear that is all i knew . i wish i could help you more but . im sorry .