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I can't belive this is happening...
She stepped toward the mirror. She looked in and saw her whole life playing before her, like some movie on the big screen. And something else... other lives, things she had never seen before but she remembered, as if from a dream of a dream...
She backed away, frightened by the looking glass's power, but it drew her in like a magnet, sucking her into it's depths.
And this is where the story of the life traveler begins.
- by xxTwinxonexx |
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- | Submitted on 01/01/2009 |
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- Title: The Life Traveler
- Artist: xxTwinxonexx
- Description: This is the beginning of a book I'm working on. Let me know what you think!
- Date: 01/01/2009
- Tags: life traveler
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Dark-Runes - 07/23/2010
- If there was more of it I think I would have said it was great, but I don't know the what this is supposed to be about. Good writing though. I don't think I could do any better, but at least equal to it.
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- NeonSpades - 07/09/2009
- your a good writer
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- Romanchikku na Zetsubou - 01/24/2009
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Pretty nice!
This has a good "hook" that makes me want to read the whole story >.< - Report As Spam
- xxTwinxonexx - 01/22/2009
- Hey if you want to see my book progress, take a look at my journal every now and then. I probably won't write often, but you never know...
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- AncorexX - 01/02/2009
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this beutifull
so kool - Report As Spam
- xxTwinxonexx - 01/01/2009
- Let me know what you think please!
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