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... I want someone to sweep me off my feet, hug me and n e v e r let me go, kiss me sweetly everytime we meet, whisper in my ear "I l o v e you." Dance with me in the moonlight under the stars on the grass with wet, seeping dew squishing between our toes, look deeply into my eyes and find my way into my bounded soul, stare deeply into each other eyes and savour the moment we have together, to let go of my hand and let me go and let me be free, to never let me run out of their minds,to tell me things will go okay when all seems to be hopeless, to remember me when i leave, to take me back with all the forgivness in my heart..
and for someone to let go everything they've ever wanted just to be with.
Me.
And to l o v e me, unconditionly for forever and always.
Eternity.
But things like this, n e v e r happen, only in fairytales.
Un-real, un-true fairytales.
Made up from one's mind and i m a g i n a t i o n.
Written with l o v e and passion.
But all words and emotions put into this simple story soon is crushed and turned into tiny pieces of saddness because that person who has wished and wished apon a star for this o n e amazing thing to happen to them is soon crying along with the wolf on a star-filled night with the vivid, white moon.
- by -Miiss Funky- |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/21/2009 |
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- Title: Just a Fairytale.
- Artist: -Miiss Funky-
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Description:
This is a small thing I made, i'm not sure to classify it as a Poem or Fiction story.
So I put it in here :] .
Just remember, I did make this up from my mind && i didn't copy this from anyone whatsoever :]
Please try and make the comments not too harsh but please add honesty into them!
Thank you && please rate :] - Date: 04/21/2009
- Tags: just fairytale miissfunky heartbroken tear
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Nixzi Vy - 03/11/2012
- I like it, very poetic. But it isn't a poem. A poem is something in poetic form. It is just a very poetic pro. Just so you are aware (Not trying to be a smart-ash)
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- Rina176 - 01/20/2012
- It'd rly good, I love it! biggrin
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- 8missy8 - 07/21/2011
- Its true and very good i liked it smile Good job ! biggrin
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- MR SPOOKEY - 04/02/2011
- nice!!!!! poem
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- LadyMoonlight416 - 10/03/2009
- That is really good and SO true. Great work. I love it.
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- Babycarter57 - 09/18/2009
- this is very good
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