- Doing dishes like a normal teen, a glass dish is washed you put it in the cupboard below, but all the stuff inside pushes it out and it hits the floor... your back is turned, the glass shatters and cuts your legs, you go down in shock to hold your legs, then you stay there for a few seconds... till suddenly you colapse, to the floor onto sharp pieces of glass you lay there wondering .. "is this the end" while you watch your blood surround you and you hear screaming and crying.. and then it is all silenced out, for now you are deaf and everything is peacefull, you then wonder where you are till you realize you are finally home .. away feom all the lies, hatred, drama, and from life for as your body is tortured to try and be revived your spirit leaves and takes its chance in happiness for now it is free...
- by lctweety94 |
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- | Submitted on 05/25/2009 |
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- Title: death is peacefull
- Artist: lctweety94
- Description: i saw this happen to myself one day as i was doing dishes and putting them away and well i can see and create many things and ways for stuff to happen i have much more to type but not sure wat catagories to put it under lol
- Date: 05/25/2009
- Tags: death peacefull dishes
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Comments (4 Comments)
- TattyLOL - 11/27/2009
- I hear you.death is peacful and i really think its good.but,if u can impress me with this trut i know u can do alot better
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- Kanashii Komoriuta - 06/16/2009
- uh-huh... i agree with mongomi kyoko, be more disctriptive!! :] buts its good! ;]
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- mongomi kyoko - 05/27/2009
- ok but could have been more clearer and descriptive.
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- Vexed Fire - 05/25/2009
- Someone's a little morbid lol.
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