The love of her

• Artist: looza456
• Description: this was a random thing i did.
  please be critical on commenting.
• Date: 06/08/2009
• Tags: love

She slowly fell to her knees and cried,
She could not control her tears.
She could no longer hide the fact she loved him.
And he could not possibly know She felt this way.
He could not possibly love HER.
For He is out of her league.
The one she cannot reach.
And the one she as tried so hard to keep from.

Comments

[vv7722]

"Love" is a strong word and "date" is a weaker word... So it doesn't really fit. Other than that, great! 4/5