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Chapter 2
Turin woke up to the smell of stale smoke and fresh smoke, he saw a wrinkled man clutching a cigarette.
"He rises from the dead!" The man chuckles gleefully, he was of an oriental background which you could tell from his apperance, he was about 70 years old and he was bold.
" Who.... are you?" stumbled Turin.
"Why I am Goshry and I SAVED your LIFE!" said Goshry as he threw his cigarette outside the mud hut.
"Well thank you now I'd best go..."
"What? That's it thanks have a nice day? You owe me one! Ha ha!"
"OK... What do you want?" Turin said.
"A favour... There are some... Mysterious things and uh... places..."
"And what do you want me to do about it?"
"Find out about them, the things will kill you if you are not alert but you will survive if you listen to my wise words... Take this... It's a axe of a magical kind, it will destroy all in your path besides some which will require mind power and will power rather than Physical prowess, you will gather things on your journey that will change your path but just... remember me!"
"Well that was an encouraging speech, well I suppose I owe you one." Turin said slightley unsure.
" Damn right you do, now go and return to me when you have finished!"
And so our hero set off on his adventure...
Hope you enjoyed Chapter 2!
- by Jackman666 |
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- | Submitted on 09/21/2009 |
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- Title: Mysterious Lands (Chapter 2)
- Artist: Jackman666
- Description: I want this to be Chapter 1 and the first one to be a prologue but it's not letting me edit lol.
- Date: 09/21/2009
- Tags: mysterious lands chapter
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Comments (3 Comments)
- HIKIT.^^ - 01/10/2013
- You definatly need more description. The heart of the story's in the details-- of which you have very few. Some gramatical errors too. Needs to be longer (doesn't really seem like much of a chapter). But it's not bad and interesting. Would like to see more.
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- crescentmoonassassin - 06/02/2011
- make it longer! otherwise its pretty good. moar now!
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- Vampknight2789 - 09/24/2009
- Like I said on your supposed "prologue" very short. Try making them longer
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