• Should i keep the next part or change it?

    Opening my eyes looking around its silent and it appears the lights gone. I try to get to my feet but I'm completely paralyzed. Could the fall really of had that much of an impact? Out of nowhere I hear voices and tears from someone who sounds familiar. Wait mom? Than another voice thats unfamiliar begins to speak "I'm sorry he's gone."
    It feels as though I should be sad. But instead I'm overwhelmed with fear. I begin to gag from a unbearable smell and pain falls on me as my flesh begins to rot away. Maggots start climbing onto me.

    As my eyes open I see the face etc.