The Threefold Law

• Artist: Xarcak
• Description: **I had to debate with myself whether this was a short-story or poetry. ._.'' If someone would please tell me, I will be able to know whether I put it in the right spot, or -- for future reference -- should have put it in the Poetry and Lyrics :3 Thanks**
  **Yes. This is reflecting my true emotions right now.. if you have any questions about the story/poemy.. thing.. xD .. you can PM me to ask or just leave a commenty questiony .. thing.. (Loves to answer questions :D**
• Date: 12/29/2010
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On a beautiful night full of fireflies and stars sat a young man next to the sparkling lake. As he looked down at the bloody dagger resting on his palms, he started to wish it had never happened. He started to wish he hadn't done it..
But he had already done what needed to be done. Had fulfilled his --and possibly her-- wishes. He just couldn't live with the pain of it anymore. But maybe, just maybe, she would have forgave him.. maybe she wanted him to live.. No. He had to tell himself that he had done what was best.
But on that night, as he lay there dying under the glowing full moon, he had just one regret: That he did not love her as he had promised; left her broken, just as he felt right now. The deed was done.

Comments

[Xarcak]

Oh well. Something like that >w<

[ll Sexual Feeling ll]

hmm, I can see where you would have issues classifying this. I felt as a short story it was lacking something, but didn't hold the beauty that a piece requires to be named as poetry. Maybe you could say this is an excerpt or a basic idea for a broader story?

[Xarcak]

It's like a small little piece of crap all in one biggrin ~!!

[mmelty]

I for sure wouldn't label it as poetry but its not really a short story because its more like a paragraph of a short story. But in the end I find it kinda... generic?