Crimson sons:Hyraxien Towers

• Artist: ZXCR1M50N
• Description: Small Storyline i wrote. A bit random. Part of a series about 4 brothers.
• Date: 10/15/2008
• Tags: hyraxien towers

The Towers stand high above the ground. There tops scraping the Heavens. They're only purpose for the Gods selfish wants. At the end of each century a mortal-God will ascend the tower stairs, until he finally gets to the top. And breaks the virgin clouds of the Heavens.
But no one has enterd the tower in years. Screams of wild beasts and demons are heard i the night. The towers themselves have become overgrown with Ivy.

And now, Derai Crimson and his army stand at the base of one of the towers. There swords unsheathed. They stand ready to fight for the tattered banner of Hyraxia. The opposing army, Demonic and ugly, stand ready to fight for there demonic ways. They ready there last breaths, prepare for the battle, take one last look at the night sky, and charge.
The Demons claws slashing wildly at the Humans.
The Humans swords slashing in precise and well planned slices. Until suddenly,hot breath. One of the Demons was ontop of Derai.

Comments

[Caine Argentine]

Sounds like you have the makings of an interesting series in your hands! My one piece of advice would be to check your grammar (their/there/they're) as it distracts from the story.