Lost

• Artist: Larka-love
• Description: This is a poem story so ya
• Date: 01/13/2009
• Tags: lost

As the lights deem out all I see is black just like the night
sky scaring me and it makes me cry how do I escape this black hole that I seem to stand in fear and dreaded place I cant be here. I'll I have ever seen was light even in the darkest of days but know every thing seems lost I cant see anything its lost, and so am I.
Were shale I go. Over and over I again I pas back and forth so I think this place of nightmares could be No were and every were at the same time it could be moving but do I belong her?? Is this the end?? Is this the place that ever one said was full of evil? Is this hell???

TO BE CONTINUED

Comments

[dodo xXxvampirexXx]

woooooooooooooooooow!!
I realy realy loved it
keep it up

[Rian_Lena]

If this is a poem then it should go in 'Poetry/Lyrics' but if it's a story then it goes in 'Fiction'
And the structure is a bit odd, but the concept is very nice. Just be careful on spelling and grammar.