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No one listens......
No one cares........
of how i truly feel and care....
I wish i could get respect....
but i always get rejected.
No one cares about me am i the only
person who feels invisiable.?
if i could i would love to be invincable
but i cannot get that strenth
if no one notices the true me
But it is like they are blinded and could not see.
But what truly matters might be just around the corner
whatever it might be.
I am lonley...all the friends are in pairs
im sad.... but of course no one might ever care
there is a girl sad and lonley i walk to her and sit.
It looks as if there was a mirrior image of me...
finaly i have a friend who cares more of me than her own life..for her friend i am finaly...someone notices me...
- Title: no one
- Artist: 361JayJay
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Description:
its a poem i wrote when no one ever listenes to me..its kinda short....
oh ya this is my first poem so it might be bad sorry if it is - Date: 11/27/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Lord Bubbleygirl - 06/09/2009
- this is very very good!!! 100/5 lol
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- Detective Killjoy - 11/29/2008
- I feel the same way. I give you a 5/5. =')
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- captain cassie - 11/29/2008
- good job i guess u should of rimed
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- smol might - 11/29/2008
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well u say care a lot...just work on some of the words to replace it with better ones smile then it would better.since its ur first time...5/5
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- 361wildcat - 11/28/2008
- it was her first poem...10/10...5/5 whatever..
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- fanasy_queen - 11/28/2008
- Wow... well, I guess I should say sorry. I give it a 3/5
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- 361JayJay - 11/28/2008
- its a poem..and thanks yes it is my first....
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