Just me and my guitar

• Artist: super_slayin_siopao
• Description: This is a song I've been working on for awhile. I want it long, but not a mile. I'd like it short and very sweet. I'm also trying to find the beat.
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  Like it? Hate it? So-so? Tell me please!
  Please do not steal and re-enter this! I've worked (and am still) working on this! :heart:
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: guitar

I like to sit, maybe alone, or amongst friends, again
and sit and think and then strum on my guitar.
The way I think, the way I feel, the way I am,
Let go and start again.
Let's sing verse one, maybe verse two, where is verse three?
It's great and fun to strum and sing,
while maybe while you're on a swing.

Well this is me and my guitar you see,
there's nowhere else I'd rather be...
Can't you see?
Me and my guitar are sweet,
we like to write and play the beat,
sometimes it's so fun I'll tap my feet.
Well, I, me and my guitar are gonna play,
maybe all day!
Just sit back and listen
or strum the strings of your guitar along.
just find the beat and you can also sing along!

This is me and my guitar you see,
there's nowhere else I'd rather be...
Can't you see?
Because right now it's me and my guitar and right now life is...very...sweet...

Comments

[ELISHA 7852]

i love the poem turn it into a song

[Dreadful Stranger]

nice but in the 2nd paragraph...you shouldnt rhyme along with along...try the second along...
''or strum the strings of your guitar along.
just find the beat and you can also sing along!''
try changing 'also sing along' to 'sing this song'

if u dont like it then nevermind ._.