The Full Moons Effect.

• Artist: Mrs_Black_Bear
• Description: This is the first poem I ever wrote. The Full Moons Effect was written when I was a freshmen in High School I believe which would have been 99-2000. I was a very lonesome, angry and depressed being. One night after a monumental sized argument with my parents and just an in general no good very bad day, I was unable to sleep so I got up and went to my dads computer room. I turned on my dads pc, opened up word and began to wright the following is what came out. I hope you enjoy.
• Date: 07/16/2008
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The moon is round and full of light but not a comforting night. As I sit here and type this poem it makes me sad that my house is not my home. For home is full of love, laughter and delight, on a night when the moon is so bright. Unfortunately for me I live in house full of anger and hate on such a wonderful night. Now you may say what about your friends yes I have friends but I do not get to see them on such a night. Usually when I do see them it is when I’m actually a delight not when I need them so. I wish that this terror would end so I could start anew again, with high school behind me and college ahead I’m lost in space where the moon shines ahead. I wish I could be where you are so I could earn more friends hopefully some true ones unlike those I forbid. A home not yet found but engraved in my head where lye many true friends who seek me out when I am down. Hope still last that maybe afar is this home that is so fondly engraved in my heart. Where the full moon shines, and yet I’m not sad but happy instead.

Comments

[nasralraheeb]

a bit scaterbrained, but what freshman isn't? over all, i think this is better than most freestyle i have read, since it actually has a point to it, and i can see that you were at least a little angry/annoyed when you wrote it.

[Mrs_Black_Bear]

Please Leave comments if you are going to rate me poorly as I take poor ratings of this poem and "The Full Moons Effect" personally. I wright freehand style which means my poems do not rhyme most of the time it is an actual style of wright so if this is why you are giving me poor ratings I ask that you look this style up before rating based on rhyme again as many many famous modern and not so modern poets wrote/wright in this style. Thank you.