Dragon's Song

• Artist: queenofinsanity6
• Description: Not actually a song, just a poem written for the man I love...
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: dragonssong phoenix dragon love wait

Of all the people I have loved
And many I have lost
All the ones that I have known
And those that I have not
None is dearer to my heart
Than my own dear dragon

Fierce and strong
And brave is he
Protecting all he loves
With quickened claws
And burning breath
Defends us all from harm

A lonely path
He tends to walk
While protecting
Stands apart
And he himself is harmed
There’s my lot
To tend him there
For as it’s his to guard us all
‘Tis my job to heal the wounds

He, my dragon
And I, his bird
Together hand in hand
One day shall walk
Across this world
doing all the good we can

Up till then
We’ll not just wait
We’ll fight the world
From day to day
Change the world
In our small way

Though for now
We’re forced apart
I still know our hearts are one
So I can wait
For that sweet moment
When at last our time has come
For I love my dear sweet dragon
Just as true as he loves me

Comments

[white_angel_sweetheart]

im a romantic writer so love is easy for me. if you write about things closest to your heart you'll make it where you wanna be...
Keep Working on it! Great job! smile

[white_angel_sweetheart]

wow r u a poet or just starting? because that is good.. seriously im a poet. i havent been that long but everyone says i have a talent with words. im going to tell you that you need to keep writing you also have a talent with words. the best of poets can just put words on paper and dress them up to look good but a real poet uses their own feelings in the matter like you did . the dragon sybolizes love which alot of poems have a problem with conveying..... but u were able to convey it. Great job!

[METRO SKiiES]

Wow... so pretty. It lacks that little spark of sheer brilliance, though, I'm not sure why. I've read other poems of yours, your work is amazing. Please keep writing!

[Cissia]

I really like this; the imagery with the dragon is very well thought out, and I thought adding yourself as a small bird was a nice touch. The rhyme scheme is very smooth too, and I love how its clear that even though the dragon is typically a fierce symbol he's your protector and very loving. Good job smile