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Man's Canvas
I feel as if i have become part of it all.
My soul, one with the artist nature.
I feel as if i hold her brush, pondering the scene to craft on this unique canvas.
I admire her handy work and must make it better.
It's all so perfect how shall I make it better.
Can i make it better?
I know I will paint what I desire, my inspiration has come to me.
Smoke shall consume the sky, use black paint instead of blue.
Brown paint will be the ocean for, polluted and destroyed.
Red shall be bloodshed for the hostile life around me.
Green not for grass, but smog in which I paint.
Yellow and orange can do no harm, but can only make better.
Yellow and orange will stay off this canvas.
I have crafted the world in the image I cause.
Mankind was my inspiration, destruction my colors.
- Title: Man's canvas
- Artist: furrie223
- Description: This is a poem based on the world today and what we are doing to it...
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: polution paint canvasmans
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Comments (6 Comments)
- JeanMorgan - 07/17/2008
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Paragraphy? Are you kidding me??? He has one stanza. You don't know paragraphy poems unless you've read Homer, Ovid, or Virgil. Poetry doesn't have to be short and sweet, that's what makes it so versitile!!! - Report As Spam
- JeanMorgan - 07/17/2008
- Absolutly Beautiful! I adore the extended metaphore you have going. I'm deeply impressed!
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- xX_Emo_Light_xX - 07/17/2008
- Beautiful. Not at all paragraphy, clever ideas and I love the damaged feeling of the last line.
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- Harmony-B - 07/17/2008
- That was great.10/10
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- Leavina - 07/17/2008
- Deep, but slightly paragraphy
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- Flagged2774 - 07/17/2008
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2 long
2 big
they'er better in short version... - Report As Spam