The Peaceful Dark

• Artist: Kelsika
• Description: This poem is meant to be somewhat ambiguous, and can thus be interpreted a multiplicity of ways. However, if you choose to interpret my work in a final, depressing sort of way, I ask that please keep such thoughts to yourself. Thanks for reading.
• Date: 07/17/2008
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In darkened woods, all lacquered black,
A single thought, “Never look back.”
It echoed through an angered mind,
Which answers sought, but none did find.

The foliage of the shadowed trees
Swayed in a nonexistent breeze.
As though a wall of water wove
Throughout the deep, forbidden grove

In solitude, pure peace was sought
The price was paid, the wares were bought.
A gentle sigh, the calm embrace
Of nothingness in time and space.

Comments

[Black Ravenz]

very,calming,i just love it.you are very talented

[Raziel Nephilim]

Very calming. 5/5

[deathsent]

Hmmm I love how it flowed. Its quite insightful I take it as someone lost and mad so they go out into the woods to cool off and get lost in their own little world. 5/5 I love it.

[Firlodge_the_second]

Meh, it's ok, I guess.

Your rhyme looks/sounds a little forced though.